Friday, September 25, 2009
Figurine
I stare at the dark figure coming slowly closer towards me, as he walks into the light I gradually start to see him better, his beautiful form. I observe him, trying to take in every last mysterious detail. His plump, luscious lips, his big, broad shoulders, his long, strong fingers, his slightly spiked, messy hair, his deep chocolate brown eyes, his browned skin down to his muscular legs. The way he holds himself tells me he knows what he looks like and knows that he could get any girl he wanted. His piercing eyes gaze into mine, swallowing in all that I am. I notice he doesn’t seem to look down to me like I had expected, instead he looks at me in interest, in curiosity. He takes a step closer to me, my breath instantly catches in my throat and my heart starts to race.
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Love the detail, it gave me enough detail to know where to go with my imagination, but not enough to restrict it :)
ReplyDeleteI want to know more. (that's good)Detailed, short, sweet and to the point. I loved it.
ReplyDeleteVery good. I love your description of "his piercing eyes swallowing in all that I am." Good job.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds kind of like a romance novel. But it's still good.